Remember When
I was once a growing flowerSlightly wiltedBut still tryingBut then heHe cameWith his greedy handsAnd tore my petals offOne by oneAnd nowNowI am nothing but a stemTrying to surviveThe wind
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Ouch. Stark to the point, I feek the pain.I love the repetition of he/ He and now NowBrad.,-._|\/Oz\Love is for giving, life is for living,\_,--._/living means loving, and loving means forgiving. v...
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Harsh and too the point. . .hides nothing. . . powerful as always love.
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This makes me think of the world being against us. No matter how hard we try or what we do, we get a slap in the face. There are knockbacks everywhere. Never give up. Perseverance is the key to...
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thank you all very much for your words...they mean a lot to me...they truly truly do...
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Even bare stems can find a place within them to create another flower...powerful image...and the story is as much about survival as it is about the pain that caused this...Every new beginning comes...
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yes, thats very true...thank you for your words, soulsease...and thank you for reading- it's much appreciated
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An extremely vivid piece on its surface, and very metaphorical.well done.- TonyMy poetry book is available here:AmazonBarnes and NobleBooksaMillion author's web pagepress release
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I hope you bent his stem over 'til it broke, .This is a very deep read, CryOphelia.Partly because it speaks to the cruelty of some men towards women, i.e. they get what they want and it's sayonara,...
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aw lol...thank you, for your words, billy...they are very sweet...take care of youthank you again~*~ Cry ~*~
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